one single impression 66: denouement
photo:takomabibelot, flickr
unable to see
tragedy blocks the blind light
closed the eye opens
overwhelming sound
silence wraps a colored gift
open the ear hears
the end begins anew
born in bubbling water
sprouting tiny wings
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sounds like a rebirth, I imagine someone struggling and in the end change themselves and became whole again
sounds like the life cycle of a mosquito (egg, larva, pupa, adult). my problem may be the bubbling waters, mosquitoes lay their eggs in very still and even stagnant water. 🙂
nice set of haiku, it has me thinking for a while after I leave.
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That is lovely. When you put three haiku together they interact like three sets of ripples in the pond. This set makes waves of meaning and image like infinity.
Oh, I like that very much. How I could use those wings!
Beautiful. It leads to a fine inner truth…
Hello Piece of Pie~ I really enjoyed reading this one. It reminds me of child birth. The baby can’t see, hear until it enters the world with his/ her wings. Beautifully written. Have a great day.