read write poem: napowrimo, day 14; michelle’s poefusion: no 30, pick a favorite poem and make a new poem by adding lines of your own between each pair of original lines–i picked gregory orr, entitled “love poem;” photo: bob dylan, photobucket
a black biplane crashes through the window
massive magnificent a white horse galloping fast
of the luncheonette. the pilot climbs down,
veranda intrusion metal clanging knight
removing his leather hood.
gallently dismounts he bows in noble manner
he hands me my grandmother’s jade ring
humming musical notes twirl round his metal helmet
no, it is two robin’s eggs and
bob dylan in dark glasses a hundred years ago
a telephone number: yours.
twangs a familar sonnet remembering our forgotten.
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
This was fun to read! I read it in two ways: once, every other line so it was like two poems and the second time, like one whole poem! It’s great either way!
Yeah, clever stuff! These can be difficult to get right.
Enjoyed reading this! Phew, and doesn’t Bob Dylan look young?
really well done 🙂
good for sure….and Bobby always looks good…even as he gets close to my age…keep writing
All the way to telephone number. Very nice.
Very Dylanesque!
Hello One More Believer~ Loved the beginning of this poem as it pulls you instantly. And the ending brings it all together nicely. Well done. Have a nice day.