one single impression: no 57, smoke
read write poem: napowrimo April 1 2009
photo:  Olga_Dietrich, flickr

standing still in white
one would have caught the keen eyes
murmuring serene

beneath her veil
clear as the blue sky shining

distracted since dawn
he waried of the hour
his chilled shifting heart

nearing the noon niche
both would soon recognize love
in the clearing mist


9 thoughts on “oath

  1. Oh, so nice! It will be such a nice day, hopefully a nice lifetime. Here we have the nervous anticipation that only a bride can experience. I can feel it with her here.

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