read write no 70: in your face
photo: Wendy van der Drift, flickr
wonder what he sees
when he places his soft brush
across white canvas
imperfect and round
dreaming in the drifting art
composition cured
original mold
with little lines obscured
his heart painted pure
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An excellent choice of faces to write poems about. I particularly like the first haiku and the very last line.
Wow!!!
Wow!!!
He thought of what others’ drew and stole it. Hahaha.
I love that Picasso said that a great artist steals. 😛
He was definitely amazing.
To look inside his mind’s eye and see what he sees. Very nicely written haiku chain.
-Nicole
Lovely poem! And I agree that the choice of faces to write on is excellent.What does an artist see as he carries out his art? Lovely.
I like the almost-rhyming and the short burst of thoughts