Michelle’s Poefusion Friday Five: freckle, evade, peck, scoot, dash
ReadWritePoem: ReadWriteImage No 11
photo: Strange Fruit Helsinki, Lucasrocha, flickr
the diverse collection of
my ruffled significant substance
evades the enigma
of where i have roamed
honor and trust
the color of freckled turquoise
transform in string and bead
rattle the observant
persuasive pebbles mingle
with singing cowrie shells
disturbing the depths
peck at the performance
subdued by solid gravity
layers of time and rock
resolve recollections
once imagined in transit
cleave a dash of daydreamer
with ruinous ropes of risk
parade the progression of paradise
breathe the fluid free
rushing towards the rigid rim
whimpering whispers
scamper and scoot
reveal my pink purpose
perched upon
a swaying stick
Hello One More Believer, this is an excellent poem. So many nice lines to compliment the swaying sticks. Nice job. Hope all is well with you too. Have a nice night.
I love the internal rhyme and alliteration in this piece. Amazing photo – I’ve never seen anything like this –
Nice work!
such a beautiful take on the prompt. These lines are simply superb
“my ruffled significant substance
evades the enigma”
Very funky photo, and your poem is packed with goodness. Love this:
‘persuasive pebbles mingle
with singing cowrie shells
disturbing the depths’
Love your alliteration in your piece – interesting take on the RWP prompt.
The Nobleman
-Nicole