thommyg’s 3www, this week is disarray, rabble, validate
photo: northwest goods shop
it’s nothing really
my hair in disarray
caught in a button
from your shirt
the rabble of conflict
quietly erased
validate the course
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thommyg’s 3www, this week is disarray, rabble, validate
photo: northwest goods shop
it’s nothing really
my hair in disarray
caught in a button
from your shirt
the rabble of conflict
quietly erased
validate the course
I love it. Love it. What a great read.
Very nicely done. So much implied, in so few words.
Always mysterious, but always enlighrtening.
Love that hair decorating comb.
And the short verse too.
3WW: mysticism
I’m left wondering how the button became caught, causing disarray…and how this erased the conflict…leading to validation. Nice tight writing.
Good!
So much said in so few words!
love the subtlety and the imagery that sets a scene not so serene