3WW

unwrapped

three word wednesday: crumble, illicit, nerve
photo: elementoar, flickr

x 1.
sometimes
i crumble into a weak pile, and
when we’re together, again
in an illicit corner, quiet
my nerve, ablaze
internally for you,
crackling

x 2.
sometimes
i crumble into a weak pile, and
when we’re together again, illicit
quiet my nerve, ablaze
internally for you,
crackling…

 

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12 thoughts on “unwrapped

  1. Interesting. I think if you were to move illicit the line above, “when we’re together again, illicit” it works better. But that’s just me.

  2. This reminded me of the intensity relationships used to have in my life before I was married! So very well constructed, succinct and powerful – thanks for sharing it!

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