Read Write Word #9; and totally optional prompts: repetition, poetry form. attempted the tritina, which is much, much easier than the sestina, blue breeze i attempted a few poems back
photo: durango, colorado,
duplicate liquid loose locomotive
impersonate steam-filled mirror
rails and rails rumbling rocky
unyielding sleek rugged rocky
steady sings lucid locomotive
nomadic migratory mountain mirror
perched upon a parked mirror
recognize relentless rocky
longing love luminating locomotive
locomotive mirrors a rocky reflection
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This is too much for me to say out loud, (I can’t speak properly) but it fills me with vivid images.
Perfect words in explanation there.
Love the pace and the repetition here, good choice of keywords too!
It has the rhythm of that train…the words are great…
I can see that mirror rattling and the scene blurring and appearing.