PoefusionFriday5

fracture

 

with an awkward wind
the earth turned
a fatal turn
uninterrupted
eternal spin
bumped by a breeze
damp with mold
corrupted minds
skeptics smiled
at the success
of failure
* * * * * * * *
poefusion Friday 5: awkward, uninterrupted, fatal, damp, skeptic
Photo: PrASanGaM, flickr

Advertisements
Standard

4 thoughts on “fracture

  1. That is great, the poem has wonderful sounds and the ending is brilliant. A dark poem turning into maybe a condemnation of scepticism and done with great grace and elegance. I haven’t seen such a dark and wonderful poem turn into that idea before, very cool.

  2. I like the way the words just falls in place, not really good as Paul at critiquing poems but it reads really well to me

writing is everything...

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s