4 aces

hardly negotiable she stared at the blank eyes staring back. it was gonna be a tough card game tonight. placing each card in a delicate design of mysterious femininity the evening began in a familiar tone of subtle silence. usually it was winning and that was all that mattered. this evening it was altogether something different. sipping whiskey, nostrils flaring, restless jaw jamming the signs were all there.
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4 thoughts on “4 aces

  1. well,, not being a card player by any stretch of the imagination,, i am going to have to hope you email me and tell me what this means….

    in addition, i just want to let you know i am posting my new poetry on justpaisley…. now, and i sure would love it if you came over and had a look….

  2. That is a very original piece of writing. Poker prosepoem but there is a subtle depth in the idea too, femininity, something different from winning. Intriguing and different, very cool,

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