3WWhot ice dark eyes smoulder nostrils flare restrained smile seethes deny the uncomfortable Bones 3WW weekly three word wednesday prompt: smile, deny, uncomfortable; photo: young elizabeth taylor, photobucket Advertisements Like this:Like Loading... Related Standard
I was thinking sexual at the beginning, but totally got anger by the end. Nice, smooth transition. June 5, 2008 at 8:17 pm
“restrained smile seethes” sort of describes how I feel when I have to be civil and pleasant towards my boss. June 6, 2008 at 9:25 pm
Pictures can bring about some great words from your observations.Perhaps she’s thinking of her next divorce. June 8, 2008 at 4:23 am
i am the founder and editor of Glossolalia (http://www.glossolalia7.com), an on-line journal for flash fiction. i am currently conducting a call for submissions for the inaugural issue of Glossolalia. all rights remain with the author. if you are interested in submitting your work, please email submissions@glossolalia7.com. thanks so much, and stay creative!!! regards, vesper de vil June 8, 2008 at 10:53 am
I was thinking sexual at the beginning, but totally got anger by the end. Nice, smooth transition.
I can feel a number of emotions in this. You take us on a trip.
Great poem! I like how you used the prompt words. Have a great weekend!
Great write!
You did a fabulous job on this poem.
BTW I loved the audio on hips. 😉
Well-written. Your poem conveys angers really well.
“restrained smile seethes” sort of describes how I feel when I have to be civil and pleasant towards my boss.
It builds, both in words and visually…great read!
Pictures can bring about some great words from your observations.Perhaps she’s thinking of her next divorce.
Changing moods. I like this!
Random Musings
i am the founder and editor of Glossolalia (http://www.glossolalia7.com), an on-line journal for flash fiction.
i am currently conducting a call for submissions for the inaugural issue of Glossolalia. all rights remain with the author.
if you are interested in submitting your work, please email submissions@glossolalia7.com.
thanks so much, and stay creative!!!
regards,
vesper de vil
yes uncomfortable. kind of felt like she was going to kick my hiney.
Oooo – felt it blaze from the screen into my brain – great one!