noctural neverland
decayed delight
erroneous treachery
human infidelity
buried burdens
may be madness
cautious resistence
careful contemplation
sucking deeply
the red tonic of life
sharp teeth satisfy
yet another eternal night
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Writers Island topic prompt No. 33: ferocious; and Bones 3WW weekly three word wednesday No 85 prompt: cautious, human, maybe
photo: myLegsHurt_photos, photobucket
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I missed your WI so I’m glad to catch you here. Vivid images you have powerfully expressed.
a delicious dance with the undead….
Chilling!
A dark beauty!
Gemma
This is like using watercolors .. creating faint yet distinct images with an strong underlying emotion .
Nicely done .
I can practically see the fangs…
An intense piece. Wonderful.
beautifully portrayed with a great visual
very vampirish…especially the fangs part but the red tonic part makes me think that too
i liked it
I didn’t get it until the last two stanzas. Then I had to go back and reread the rest.
Loved the ending.