Poefusion Friday Five: splinter, distractions, modler, votive, punctuate
photo: michael, sja30044, flickr
watching him swim
molder of dreams
diverting beautiful distractions
splinters cascading
rainbow waterdrops
punctuate his liquid wake
vaporous votive secrets
announce unheard
over the loud crackling speakers
tangible flluid sounds
day 24 NaPoWriMo…
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I like it when the swimmer is outside the water like in your photo so you can better see his body. Your poem and photo go hand in hand. Nice job. Have a nice day.
So, that’s what a swimmer looks like, grin.
I especially found effective your use of splinters and the phrase, “vaporous votive secrets”.
Enjoyed the alliteration in this piece – as well as the photo. 🙂 Nice work!
this was very smooth,, just like i imagine a body like that would cut thru the water…….