3WW, Napowrimo

ThePassing

Bones weekly three word wednesday
3WW No 9 prompt: touching, visible, stage
photo: kellyess12, photobucket

sunset

touching his face
for visible signs of life
she reacted to death
as another stage of existence

shared love spilling over
sorrows wet tears revealed
gathered in weightless
pebbles of grief
recalling a thousand moments

kissing him goodbye
she laid to rest
their love
on this side of eternity
discerning his soul take flight

 day 14 NaPoWriMo

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7 thoughts on “ThePassing

  1. Pretty powerful writing on this one. You know it works when it brings a person or two people to mind when reading. Also, my eyes tearing up at the end is a good clue as well! I’ll be reading more.

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