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YoungAtHeart

Young Girl

Writers Island prompt: magic
photo: azsoen, photobucket.com

tears falling in a steady rain
blind to conceive the sound

alone with unpracticed strength
hesitant of tomorrow’s promises

hope springs pure
in a tender young heart

hearing her son’s heartbeat
for the first time was…magic

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12 thoughts on “YoungAtHeart

  1. When we are faced with certain circumstances that require our strength to hurdle it, we often feel at a loss where to draw the strength, but we have an inner courage and we are surprise when it surface in moments when we most needed it – I like the message of this poem that for me simply express that. Hope, it is everything. She draw strength hearing her son’s heartbeat – that part is magical.

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

  2. I still remember the day my son was born (almost 12 years ago now.) It was the day I realised true magic does exist in this world. Thanks for reminding me of it!

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