Poefusion Friday 5 prompt: interlude, grotesque, chemistry, neglect, shoelace
Photo: ericalambert, photobucket
his brief interlude
with tenderness and love
exposed the grotesque form
filled with neglect
often forgetful
he momentarily recalls
the captivating chemistry
filling the vacant
concealing his soul
reclusive once again
brought a quiet sigh
to his solitary life
tying his shoelace
brought some relief
to the all too fleeting
and enigmatic moment
Nice job Little Wing! I saw a show today about 80’s movies and for some reason the Elephant Man clip comes to mind here. I don’t know, that’s just what came back to mind. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.
A truly enjoyable read. The first lines pulled me right in and lead me to the twisting end. Nice job!
This sounds like a sad, lonely person.
This was nice, esp. the image, the subject and the words fit so beautifully well. Thank you for sharing.
i wonder if you have any idea how very close you came to speaking the exact words that fill the lament of the lonely…. this was painfully beautiful…..
awww; just the photo made me sad
This really pulled at me. I have to echo paisley.