The Proposal

3WWW. prompt: care, unexpected, weekend


it was an unexpected invitation
sitting alone we talked

speaking he spoke
together us two
for a weekend

departing friday
and returning monday

there was a long pause
as i considered my options

taking care to remember
what happened last time… 


14 thoughts on “The Proposal

  1. pieceofpie says:

    thank you pia, for the encouragement…yes, i do agree, it is hard to turn the possibility of an adventure aside…but when we remember how good it wasnt the last time..

  2. Your poem captures a moment of indecision and reflection nicely. It is difficult to hope things will go differently when experience and instincts say otherwise. Nice job.

  3. Thanks for stopping by smoochdog.com and reading my piece on disbelief. I really enjoy this poem, it leaves me wondering a bit and I like that.

  4. I’m with the others. I have to wonder what happened last time for her to have these reservations. Why couldn’t they go away together and it be what it might be? Nice job.

    Have a nice day.

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