haiku my heart.beat
soft
speak
whisper
companions
tied together true
muted memories of nearness
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rebecca’s friday recuerda mi corazon haiku my heart
photo: bloom, hyacinth50, flickr
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I love your words… “soft, speak, whisper…”
Pretty blooms, too!
Nice treatment for the pic. Enjoyed it.
Lovely whispering’s here, murmuring softly!!
muted whispering indeed. LOVELY!
oh
this —->
~~~muted memories of nearness~~~
plum
takes my breath away…
{{ U knew it would }}
So very pretty this November morning.
there is tenderness here. companions tied together true…so perfect for memorial day. i love the reference spoken in the universal beauty of flowers.
thank you for your grace.
As we are all tied together…beautiful
what a beautiful observation!!
Reading your post made me think of several close friends…very poignant…thank you!
Lovely words and interesting form.
Melanie
Beauty in image and verse…a lovely bouquet to warm hearts in November
This is so beautiful in word and image, I had soft, and companions on my mind too this week :~)
Sue x
quite a lovely verse and image
i like it very much.
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
I enjoyed your poem. I don’t know what makes it a haiku. Is there more than one kind?
hi cheryl, just to clarify “Haiku my heart … recuerda mi corazon… ] is the title of rebecca’s weekly prompt… most of the time we all try for a haiku but some days there’s just another who comes along… instead of a haiku it is fibonnaci….
this is very lovely!
“muted memories of nearness”
Sad and heavy.
… you know that song by simon and garfunkel “old friends” …
Intimate confessional. Memories, too, are often mistress whipped.
simple.
RR