haiku heights. day 26
haiku heights day 26 phoenix
photo: red321, flickr
still clanging stars roar
erase the summer burnt sky
wordless wind embrace
night speak shift appears
tame torment cool breeze besiege
fall comes quietly
sitting still shower
transparent suggestion sense
contact connection
comes the coolness close
carrying a cold climate
white weather snowflakes
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I need to think a bit more before I can comment here particularly with respect to the prompt.. do bear with me..
Beautiful changes and the cycle continues each year!!
Change….it can be beautiful…humans hesitate at change…nature does it with beauty…I like your haiku a lot…
I do like the bit that says ‘fall comes quietly’ and the sense of something new coming…
There is a sense of changing seasons in this that I like. I used to live in New England, where we had real seasons, and I enjoyed it very much. Although I’m glad to be back in the South and closer to family, I do miss the autumn color and winter snows. Your poem takes me back north for a few moments.