seashore journey
sunday scribblings: shipwrecked
three word wednesday: adapt, lie, glide
a sudden departure
started with a splash
knew it was a shipwreck
immediately immersed
wet water tread
sweet savoring surrender
crashing dryland pileup
new years eve fireworks
laughter’s luminous light
trailing trials of trouble
stars swaying sorrow
two feet feeling squishy
soaked summer sandals
unbuckled and brave
diving during darkness
two big eyes examine
hunchback harmony
in a placating plunge
flapping tall tail touch
always eternally open
comes a two oar rowing rescue
i am a walker willing to adapt
plunging possessions fall
and the big lie loosens
begins a glistening glide
to a far far away
those unlikeable emotions
hostile to water preferring the dry
in a downpour they disappear
lighter the load landfall appears
silent the air parts letting me go
To be let go and then to fly! So clean….
“…i am a walker willing to adapt…”, keep moving, ms pie, keep writing emotions, those intangible ones…, are they ours or we belong to them?? mmm…
Great imagery and use of words Miss Pie..I see the end as a release..an escape..Jae
“sweet savoring surrender” — glorious words. great work on the prompt!
this is different than your usual style, its almost as if you are shaking and spreading new wings.
love you ms pie.
Good poem!