monday poetry train revisited. cookin’
gautami’s monday poetry train revisited makes a monday whole
bookmark baking
set at 350 degrees
apple pie crust
a brush, sugar and milk
peeling back the skin
raw to the touch
he simply said hello and
wiped the slant clean
a touch of lemon
sour sweet surprise
his kiss is kismet
who would mind a hero
the stars create
a thousand wishes wise
warm pie with ice cream
one world right and round
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A dish of love!
What a tasty verse!
one world
right
and
round….
this is what i wish for you, hands smelling of cinnamon.
again, the last stanza just crowns the whole poem.
Well this is simply, delicious, warm, bubbly and well served. I love “peeling back the skin, raw to the touch” and “a touch of lemon, sour sweet surprise”. I know I should love the nicer sweeter parts, but I like these because they add so much interest. It is like my nephew used to say when he was four and we watched 101 dalmatians, “I like Cruella deville. She’s mean and nasty, everybody knows it, but I like her!” I like your warm pie with ice cream and the world right and round as well too dear.
xo,
Noelle