recuerda mi corazon. fixed float
one single impression: need
rebecca’s friday recuerda mi corazon [haiku my heart]
photo: tomhensr, flickr
engaging empty
quiet conversion still soak
reflective waters
…there is nothing like the movement of water to set my soul on fire… makes everything right as if out of sync without the knowing…. the familiar scent of a salty sea… the roar of a raging river, or the trickle of summer’s season… splash…
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thank you for taking me to one of my most beloved destinations…the sea.
i needed this soul dunking. this baptism of beauty. this salty kiss.
Women at the sea… you, Rebecca and me… greating from another (Dutch) ‘sea-woman’ who loves the water!
water is the ultimate healer…oh the sea is for me
I love your use of consonant sounds that are so similar (consonance) in this haiku, engaging empty, quiet conversion (c sounds) still soak, giving it a wonderful movement and quality like water. Even your description is full of consonance, the roar of a raging river. Very nice!
Noelle
I do love the water … the feel, the sound … a real connection to myself.
I will be sprinkled in the ocean some day.
love this/you, Ms. Pie…
so soothing
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Love the haiku and photo! You are so obviously at one with the reflected-light pattern of the waves: engaged, still, soaking… The language is exquisite, perfect imagery for this tone.
Lovely haiku.