Skip to content

we write poems. firemaker

April 6, 2011

we write poems: making fire
photo: sherwood411, flickr
day 6, napowrimo 2011

Fire Sticks

night comes and we sleep knowing the sun will return. before long there is a first call commotion. a band of birds on a branch twittering. connected comes the changing of lights. the darkness disappears and just as swiftly appears the soft sincerity of a rising sun. emerging we celebrate the arrival of light that dismisses the cool air and the delicate nourishing dew brushing against our cold bare feet.

in the very first hours of morning we step right into the warm shining day towards the circle where everything began. there in the middle a few thread bare sticks and the ancient fire maker. he simply sat silent whispering little lightning bolts towards the sticks. prancing as alerted fireflies they alight upon the sticks disappear and before a time fire appears in the rising smoke and crackle. he is our fire maker and we bow in reverence. as a people our fire maker gives our village much.

Advertisement
8 Comments
  1. ‘the soft sincerity of a rising sun’

    Wonderful!

  2. This is absolutely gorgeous, especially the language and the imagery. My favourite is, “prancing as alerted fireflies they alight upon the sticks”.

    -Nicole

  3. Really original and evocative. I can feel the warmth.

  4. The imagery is outstanding in this, ms pie.

    Pamela

  5. This is a delight to read. Really lovely

  6. Wonderful imagery..Vivid…

    ignition point

  7. Wonderful Imagery….Vivid….

    ignition point

  8. Geraldine permalink

    Very evocative and vivid words, I enjoyed reading this.

writing is everything...

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

Follow

Get every new post delivered to your Inbox.