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July 12, 2010

one single impression this week’s prompt overt
photo: Yellow Lilies, Rebecca G., flickr

morning light revealed
bright yellow swaying strong
lilies weaving way

tall leaning presence
full blooms sketch a sunrise view
startling sight

walking further
beneath a fertile flower
exists another new

coffee in hand
morning summer ritual
greet a glorious garden

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10 Comments
  1. Beautiful words, as always.

  2. Love the summer yellow and the coffee in hand to greet the garden!

  3. i was walking that garden with you! thanks for your lovely contribution to the prompt.

    peace,
    JP/deb

  4. Thanks. Felt relaxed.

    Beautiful words.

  5. Oh, this is exquisite. I am so glad I stopped in. Perfection.

  6. summer’s bliss…almost perfect…nature and a cup of coffee in hand to usher in the new day, what more can we ask for?

    i wish for a beautiful garden like this one in your poem…:-)

  7. your garden must indeed must be beautiful as your words show :)

  8. A gorgeous ritual, a beautiful meeting.

  9. Stunning!! From the very first word – and the image – wow. What a great turn of the page into your “overt” poem. Lovely way to begin my day!

    My Overt Poem may be read here.

  10. Your lilies are beautiful and set off these beautiful haiku verses so wonderfully. All of the beauty is out in the open for sure!
    ..

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