equal ends
readwritepoem napowrimo day 30 free day [and farewell]
we were walking
in a current of circles
going everywhere
together
above our heads
gray rainbow clouds
rattling loose a
curtain of rain
thunder crashing
we kept moving
the want not
to stop
unasked we’re
drawn into a
transparent downpour
slows our thoughts
stumbling into a small
shaded sanctuary
we wade within
time crept awhile
until we ventured
out from under the
liquid shelter
no words could
cover
soaked we felt
a dampness
through and through
a creeping chill
of a strange invasion
i didn’t care
it felt free
i never wrote
about that
moment
during
the unguarded
of nothing near
and the quiet
of passing comes
i consider
and contemplate
these moments
such as today
this transient soaring
of a slice shared
bite by bite
a raw unmeasured
minute divided
and halfed
a 30-day
sweet sentence
signals a stay
i say to you
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unasked we’re
drawn into a
transparent downpour
Nicely written! It has been fun stopping by here as well!
-Weasel
An intriguing poem, this. Enjoyed it.
Excellent! The first stanza just drew me in. Wonderful!
That was a fun read! Very much enjoy this piece.
A 30 day sweet sentence it was indeed and it did feel free.
I enjoyed this elegant poem