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March 26, 2010

three word wednesday: brazen, hunger, nuzzle
photo: little soldier, kimtojin, flickr

discovering the cure enabled one to forego the everyday attempt of simple gestures. dodging dialogue.  acknowledging the frail. bypassing a morning kiss. a nuzzle of intimacy. hello. yes, i know, i haven’t been a lot of here lately. everything involved the cure and there was no space left to absolve his losing ground. the hunger of the hunter never rested. once the sun set it was a race to find refuge from the brazen onslaught of the unseen enemy.

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From → 3WW, short story

7 Comments
  1. It is so difficult to be safe sometimes. nicely done.

  2. brazen enemy…yes it always seems it must be that way.

  3. I love the urgency of this!

  4. I like the immediacy of this. The tone is restrained, though, as of something too urgent to not process calmly.

  5. Phew, I know there’s a secret message in here somewhere, but I’m struggling unwrapping it, a bit like the Emperor’s new clothes, perhaps.

    I like the way you got the three little words in though!!

  6. thommyg permalink

    Nicely done. Taut, powerful.

  7. the unseen enemy … powerful stuff.

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