gallop gone

March 21, 2010

three word wednesday: pulse, shard, weary
photo: DennisKirk , flickr

weary awakening not much sleep
a particular star in last night’s sky
comet comes calling cerebral glide
riding saddle summons
possibility persist stirruped feet engaged

light recognition dawn’s racing hoofbeats
gravity’s pulse and pull homeward descent
earthbound tied a dreamer’s plunge
water splash array no need for air

slipping soothe surround soft bed
shards of cosmos between my toes
morning confessions yoke disclose
trying to catch the 6am train

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3 Comments

noxalio permalink

wonderful!

loved the final
stanza … a lot.
especially the
middle two
lines.

noxy.
thommyg permalink

I really like the feel and the pace of this one. Well done.
v!shu permalink

“water splash array no need for air”
gr8 lines buddy