a particular place

June 30, 2009

three word wednesday, fickle sparkle wrinkle

swift the sound runs
along the wrinkle of wind
woven wild, the quiet canyon
intangible, the quick empty grasp
blue the river sparkle
fickle the smiling sun
alone together telling stories

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4 Comments

ThomG permalink

down to the wire on this one.

i like how you constructed the lines, very untraditional.
Michelle Johnson permalink

I’ve been to this place as I’m sure everyone has at one time or another. And, I’m sure those stories keep growing throughout the years. Beautifully written. Loved the line: wrinkle of wind. Have a great night.
lissa permalink

calming, like sitting around and enjoying the breeze, that must have been what’s it’s like to be in those canyon caves
c.r.stone permalink

Beautiful images.