three word wednesday, fickle sparkle wrinkle
swift the sound runs
along the wrinkle of wind
woven wild, the quiet canyon
intangible, the quick empty grasp
blue the river sparkle
fickle the smiling sun
alone together telling stories
You’re currently reading “a particular place,” an entry on Piece of Pie ala Mode
6.30.09 / 4pm
down to the wire on this one.
i like how you constructed the lines, very untraditional.
6.30.09 / 5pm
I’ve been to this place as I’m sure everyone has at one time or another. And, I’m sure those stories keep growing throughout the years. Beautifully written. Loved the line: wrinkle of wind. Have a great night.
7.8.09 / 11am
calming, like sitting around and enjoying the breeze, that must have been what’s it’s like to be in those canyon caves
7.18.09 / 12am
Beautiful images.
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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