liberty

June 11, 2009

three word wednesday: dangerous, keepsake, restless

dangerous and misplaced his soul rolled three cartwheels before tumbling to a slow sloppy stop. questioning the recoil of tangible life the keepsake of suggestion emptied the breath from his anchored restlessness. quiet and barefoot the cool edge of sand and surf awoke his detached exploration. responding to the unquenchable he decided to stay the day while observing the setting sun over the stormy seas sliding past the gray horizon.

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7 Comments

anthonynorth permalink

I think I’d have stayed and watched too
lissa permalink

the first sentence’s got me hook, sounds like someone just died and gone to the clouds and now is now is stopping to enjoy the sunset that he never got to enjoy when he was alive…or maybe not
Michelle Johnson permalink

Staying to watch something so beautiful in life can sometimes help one slow down and refocus their life’s priorities. Well written. Have a great night.
Jeeves permalink

Wow!!!I shall stay on and on.
Tumblewords permalink

Mysterious and musical…nice read!
Andy permalink

Yeah, sounds like a day to remember!
Jane Doe permalink

Wow, this is delightful. Great alliteration and it flows so well. Wonderful!