one single impression: intersections
photo: kaymoshusband, flickr
eventually
every day typical
arises a stage
one appears revealed
bridging an everywhere
simple intention
four wheels passing through
pressing the pedal to go
sensing redemption
You’re currently reading “connection,” an entry on Piece of Pie ala Mode
6.11.09 / 12pm
Your last stanza (haiku) is perfect. I think you’ve bridged youth and the aged well here. Have a nice day.
6.11.09 / 2pm
I like that last stanza most especially. Oh, for that redemption.
6.11.09 / 4pm
Wow – this is a strong and beautiful piece. Four on the floor. Full of endings and beginnings. Wonderful.
6.11.09 / 11pm
redemption lurks in the ordinary. what a wondrous poem!
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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