one single impression 66: denouement
photo:takomabibelot, flickr
unable to see
tragedy blocks the blind light
closed the eye opens
overwhelming sound
silence wraps a colored gift
open the ear hears
the end begins anew
born in bubbling water
sprouting tiny wings
6.3.09 / 5pm
sounds like a rebirth, I imagine someone struggling and in the end change themselves and became whole again
6.3.09 / 6pm
sounds like the life cycle of a mosquito (egg, larva, pupa, adult). my problem may be the bubbling waters, mosquitoes lay their eggs in very still and even stagnant water. 
nice set of haiku, it has me thinking for a while after I leave.
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6.3.09 / 9pm
That is lovely. When you put three haiku together they interact like three sets of ripples in the pond. This set makes waves of meaning and image like infinity.
6.4.09 / 7am
Oh, I like that very much. How I could use those wings!
6.4.09 / 11am
Beautiful. It leads to a fine inner truth…
6.4.09 / 2pm
Hello Piece of Pie~ I really enjoyed reading this one. It reminds me of child birth. The baby can’t see, hear until it enters the world with his/ her wings. Beautifully written. Have a great day.
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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