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merry mutt

May 14, 2009

three word wednesday this week: bicker, nervous, trajectory
photo: james-cody, flickr

walking a nervous nirvana
the ol’ man began to bicker
with his disenchanted dog

his offending spittle
a traveling trajectory of
breakfast cheerios and 1% milk
unnoticed misses the mark.

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From → 3WW

12 Comments
  1. A nice slice-of-life entry. I can see this old guy walking the dog down teh street.

  2. blisshappens permalink

    disenchanted dog! and the descriptions of his breakfast spittle, brilliant! -Meg

  3. Ick. lol An image not easy to forget. Thanks for the read.

  4. Glad the spit missed. Spitting always grosses me out.
    but I could imagine this guy and his dog.

  5. To the point, and a great observation. Enjoyed this.

  6. Happy for the dog and great visual.

  7. Even without the photo, the imagery in this is perfectly alive and totally visual. Nifty!

  8. A man and his dog. Perfect!

    unfocussed

  9. Raw and to the point, nicely!

  10. I love an old man and his dog poem, it warms the cockles of my heart.

  11. Oh this was a fun read….

  12. Love the bottle in his hand.

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