merry mutt
three word wednesday this week: bicker, nervous, trajectory
photo: james-cody, flickr
walking a nervous nirvana
the ol’ man began to bicker
with his disenchanted dog
his offending spittle
a traveling trajectory of
breakfast cheerios and 1% milk
unnoticed misses the mark.
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A nice slice-of-life entry. I can see this old guy walking the dog down teh street.
disenchanted dog! and the descriptions of his breakfast spittle, brilliant! -Meg
Ick. lol An image not easy to forget. Thanks for the read.
Glad the spit missed. Spitting always grosses me out.
but I could imagine this guy and his dog.
To the point, and a great observation. Enjoyed this.
Happy for the dog and great visual.
Even without the photo, the imagery in this is perfectly alive and totally visual. Nifty!
A man and his dog. Perfect!
unfocussed
Raw and to the point, nicely!
I love an old man and his dog poem, it warms the cockles of my heart.
Oh this was a fun read….
Love the bottle in his hand.