salvation
three word wednesday: allure, perch, vivid; read write poem: napowrimo, day 15;
photo: Vijay Ramaswamy, flickr
vivid
sublimation
perched upon airy skies
allured by freedom’s liberty
i fly
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three word wednesday: allure, perch, vivid; read write poem: napowrimo, day 15;
photo: Vijay Ramaswamy, flickr
vivid
sublimation
perched upon airy skies
allured by freedom’s liberty
i fly
Strong and great visualization. Had me laughing at the oxymoronic first two lines
Fun cinquain!
i think i would be a bird if i were any animal
nice combination fo the prompts.
Great words of power.
Oh! I hope you fly as high as you can. And then SOAR on the wind drafts!
http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/procrastinationnapowrimo-15by-tlb.html
Yeah, nicely done – perched upon airy skies – I’d never have thought of that in a million years.
And a cinquain to boot. Cool!
I heart cinquain.
This is beautiful.