michelle’s poefusion: no 24 fortune cookie sez what is the distance between the eyes and the soul?; read write poem: day 4 napowrimo; photo: myst_stallion103, flickr
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the crystal door
shines and glistens with ease
gaze upon the deep well waters
converse
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
ah amazing cinquain!!
I like this cinquain! Comparing the eye to a crystal door is so creative!
Such well chosen words and image. The colours in that eye do shine and glisten like crystals.
A very beautiful and thought-provoking piece…
and yes–the red bird is a cardinal!
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Hello~ What a strong subject for your cinquain. The eyes can certainly open/ close a conversation very quickly with one look. Thanks for stopping by. Have a nice night.
Yeah, I like the way you wrote this, it’s nice and clean, if you know what I mean – uncluttered!
Cool!!
I like it
Beautifully done.