capricious
three word wednesday: burden, natural, ubiquitous
photo: light blue2006, flickr
silently washing dishes, her hands wet with distracted contemplation, the sun set in a brilliant orange and red. in her natural state of happiness nothing appeared out of order. the daylight approached with twittering fanfare, the alarm clock released the burden of time erased, and her husband silently snored with a smile of sleep. that’s how it was when she awoke this morning. now in the still late afternoon, dusk spread in a ubiquitous gray and purple veil laced with an invisible story. seeping into her mind, little was recognizable, seen or heard. perceiving a soundless command, her hands engaged, she lifted the latch and opened the door allowing everything out and everything in.
Wow. This just flowed. Felt myself there.
Beautiful written.
Wow, what a great little piece. I am awed by the description, the voice.
An exact place. A perfect time. This one takes me to a lovely spot.
Transportative. Conjuring the scene and the mood almost magically with the faintest tracery of words.
Fine detailing..
the setting’s ordinary but the thought presented here is dreamy and almost as if her exit or entrance is a sudden thought that her body just reacted suddenly and her mind follow later