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February 12, 2009

thommyg’s 3www, this week is disarray, rabble, validate
photo: northwest goods shop

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it’s nothing really
my hair in disarray

caught in a button
from your shirt

the rabble of conflict
quietly erased

validate the course

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8 Comments

ThomG permalink

I love it. Love it. What a great read.
mimosaeffect permalink

Very nicely done. So much implied, in so few words.
anthonynorth permalink

Always mysterious, but always enlighrtening.
gautami tripathy permalink

Love that hair decorating comb.

And the short verse too.

3WW: mysticism
carole (watermaid) permalink

I’m left wondering how the button became caught, causing disarray…and how this erased the conflict…leading to validation. Nice tight writing.
Noah permalink

Good!
Fledgling Poet permalink

So much said in so few words!
lissa permalink

love the subtlety and the imagery that sets a scene not so serene