one day
one single impression no 48: if only i had time
photo: Napoléon et la bêtise, flickr
photo: Napoléon et la bêtise, flickr
i would activate a…
revolution shift
magi magic urbane flight
fluid excursion
abstract migration
meridian adventure
acceptable coup
sink with a sunset
weightless waving azimuth
disengage epoch
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A bodacious list, a fun read!!
A revolution shift made me think paradigm shift made me look at an acceptable coup as a possibility. Enjoyed much. Thanks.
acceptable coup – Surreal thoughts enhance the expectation of ample time!
This filled me with thoughts of rewinding time and the like.
It was ethereal and rad.
Well, of course you would! What else could you do but…all that?
Thanks so much–that was fun!
sink with a sunset
weightless waving azimuth
disengage epoch
Beautiful lines.
The problem comes when you’ve multiple paradigms to contend with
This is an awesome poem, Sometimes I wish I too could leave behind all my feelings and write in the abstract. Wonderful flow of words and images.
Very enjoyable!
Indeed…we do have to take the time as it comes and enjoy it to he fullest.
I love trying to get my brain around the sounds of the words and the rhythms of the lines, as well as the content. Awesome words.
..imagination -the “magic urbane flight’
in a “fluid excursion”_
time is a “meridian adventure”_leadig to an “acceptable coup”_
and the rest sinks with the sunset ..for creating a conundrum of the mind many thanks indeed..
the last lines are simply mesmerizing
sink with a sunset… how divine!
Have you ever sat waiting and watching for the sunset in Mallory Square in Key West? Because that is precisely how I felt watching it… like I was sinking into the endless horizon along with it.
Well, I had to think about this for a bit. I am glad you wished for time to disengage your process.
There are a lot of questions I could ask but won’t. It is a nice piece of work. Thank you.
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BTW, that Napoléon et la bêtise, whose picture you used, I wonder if you have looked through most of her photos. She seems to be Italian. If so did you run across one of the Roman ‘She-Wolf’ Statue in Siena? The ‘She-Wolf’ Statue, Capitoline Wolf, is my profile picture on my MySpace.
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“meridian adventure
acceptable coup
sink with a sunset”
Nice read-
I loved so many lines that I’ll just say BRAVO!