resting near the
narrow stream
his spent spirit
received the vision
horses galloping
thunderous roar
kaleidoscope colors
transparent shades
his chanting echoes
caught a glimpse
manifest invisible
history fishing
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Bones 3 word wednesdayprompt offers this week, XCV: history, narrow, spent
photo: still water and stones, circulating, flckr
7.17.08 / 11am
oooh, very lovely descriptions, like a color dream that stays with you though the day
7.17.08 / 11am
Neat little story you packed into those lines.
7.17.08 / 11am
Ooh, full of awesome!
7.17.08 / 11am
Taking a metaphysical bent here…very nice.
-Nicole
7.17.08 / 11am
The peace of a stream can conjure up magic in a quiet mind. Very cool!
7.17.08 / 1pm
” his spent spirit” – beautiful!
7.17.08 / 11pm
Like your site and words. Just lovely.
7.18.08 / 1am
Nature and mysticism go together so well.
7.18.08 / 6am
This has the quality of myth. The surprise with the last line is a great strategy.
7.18.08 / 8am
history fishing… interesting idea. Dramatic photo. I find it interesting that these words seemed to evoke the word “kaleidoscope” from more than one author…
7.20.08 / 3am
Lovely journey into the world of myth and legend. Refreshing view of history as a persona.
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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