crying
the world fell through
poised for endless free flight
washed by the waves of wet water
souls sank
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visit weekend wordsmith. this week’s prompt: it didn’t happen
You’re currently reading “deus ex machina,” an entry on Piece of Pie ala Mode
6.28.08 / 12am
This serious, deep and dramatic! Great write!
6.28.08 / 2am
I’ve always loved your poetry. You now seem to be moving into something new and exciting.
6.28.08 / 6am
This is brief but amazing. Wonderful!
6.28.08 / 11am
definitely drowning in sadness…
6.30.08 / 5am
So much said with so few words. Poignant!
6.30.08 / 2pm
Both of these poems are very delicate and beautiful despite their sad tone. They have all the immaculate artisanship that we have come to expect in your work. Precise and complete and perfect.
7.2.08 / 9pm
This is a great pairing of poem and picture, and the title gives it an intriguing twist. Very cool.
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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