nowhere does a
morning shine brighter
men sleeping soundly
aroused awakened
admire the beauty
of women
and with nerve
consider he satisfy
her first
cafe writing option 2, pick three of eight words; photo: harry met sally, morning after they slept together. .. not reading the directions, i thought we had to use all eight…
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6.12.08 / 5pm
You did really well fitting all eight in to such a short and pretty poem. Well done.
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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