drum
beat
calls out
wires spark
hear crackling clatter
steel threaded clotheslines sprout numb trees
SundayScribblings No 110 topic: telephone; fibinacci’s are fine form of poetry, view GregoryK; photo: telephone poles, sadotis, photobucket
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5.12.08 / 8pm
Vividly worded poem and the absolutely right photo to go with it. I hadn’t realized that fibinaccis could be utilized as a form of poetry. I’ll have to try it.
5.12.08 / 9pm
Thanks for visiting my Sunday Scribbling. Fabulous poem. Love the sounds and the “numb trees.” Perfect photo, too.
5.12.08 / 11pm
Dig that last line, fer shure.
5.12.08 / 11pm
I love your poem!
5.13.08 / 1am
Crackling clatter is my favorite line.
Good poem!
5.13.08 / 1am
til
this
day I
never knew
poetry of fibs
my impoverished life improved
5.13.08 / 3am
Really enjoyed reading this. Your photo was a perfect choice too.
5.13.08 / 5am
The poetry complements the photo beautifully.
If one wanted to be a purist: some of the lines are underfilled - but who cares 
Here’s a page with links to many fibonacci poems: Fabulous Fibs
5.13.08 / 11am
I like the fib and how it builds.
5.13.08 / 12pm
Fibinacci-how clever!! Numb trees is as perfect description of telephone wires too. So much movement with the crackling drum beat and sparks.
You are a poet.
5.13.08 / 12pm
trees without life…a different kind of life flies between them. You have made a great image.
5.14.08 / 8am
Thanks for taking the time to read my Sunday Scribblings.
I enjoyed reading you post. So perfectly put, the words, themselves, painted a picture in my mind. I will look forward to visitng you more often
Sharon
5.15.08 / 7pm
unique imagery; great!
5.16.08 / 9pm
beacuse of the form the poem does race away at the end like the telephone poles into the distance, a road, or maybe a train poem,
5.21.08 / 9pm
I have never known telegraph poles so beautifully described.
Marvellous.
5.21.08 / 10pm
Vivid images - both words and sounds.
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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