blogfriday prompt: ignorant
photo, blinded, vjunkie, photobucket
placing her life
in his hands
she opened the car door
and sat in the passenger seat
music on the radio
playing an old eagles song
clear bright sunny day
the world was at peace
the highway stretched out ahead
anticipating new experiences
caught unconscious
his name is killer
handsome smooth
dark beauty
blind oblivious
life can be fun…
5.2.08 / 6pm
it can happen at any moment to any of us,, we could be him,, in the blink of an eye….
5.2.08 / 9pm
…and dangerous. Well written. Makes my stomach tighted with fear and foreboding….
5.2.08 / 9pm
I get a sense of the disturbing in this.
Excellently done.
5.3.08 / 1pm
I can’t believe he didn’t open the door for her… Asshole! 
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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