Bones weekly three word wednesday
3WW No 83 prompt: picture, reflected, stop
photo: chained life, happy_hardcore_4, photobucket
revealing
the long ago story
released
a frameless picture
in her recessed reasoning
secretly
attentive of the past
reflected deep
in the belly of her being
loitering for points
always hoping
the exposed forgotten memory
would turn back
fade
stop
day 22 NaPoWriMo…
4.26.08 / 12am
Wowie! That’s a powerful poem! Great!
4.26.08 / 1am
The last stanza is my favorite, but it’s awesome altogether.
4.26.08 / 1am
I think we all have those kind of memories we would rather just forget. But, sometimes that’s not the case. Nice job. Have a nice night.
4.26.08 / 2am
Why is it that the ones with the greatest emotion attached fade the slowest? Maybe because we revisit them oftener than we should.
Well done.
rel
4.26.08 / 2am
The photo and your words together are so compelling.
“reflected deep
in the belly of her being
loitering for points”
is an interesting and visual phrase.
4.26.08 / 2am
Hopefully she’ll be able to forget what she most wants to.
4.26.08 / 4am
Love the sense of slow movement at the end to a sudden halt.
Nice write!
Gemma
4.27.08 / 12pm
A nice piece of writing to go with the photo.
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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