Bones weekly three word wednesday
3WW No 81 prompt: funny, remember, theatre
funny to consider
the shifting of time
footsteps fading
new course created
juxtaposition
the journey
previous past
pellucid present
remember with regard
memorialized memories
the theatre of masks
hung on a hidden wall
behind closet doors
secretly existing
sunrise sunset
day 10 NaPoWriMo…
4.10.08 / 6pm
Impressive – especially when read in conjunction with the photo.
“juxtaposition” 
4.10.08 / 7pm
thank you niebla… thaz funny… i typed it twice and still had a typo…
4.10.08 / 7pm
Loved this! Shifting of time ending with sunrise sunset was very cool. Is this a form poem? Well done!
4.10.08 / 7pm
I’m going to have that song in my head the rest of the day now…
4.10.08 / 9pm
Excellent. The past fades, until reincarnated by words.
4.10.08 / 10pm
Both the photo and the poem were lovely–made me long for the past until I remembered I’m living my dream
4.10.08 / 10pm
I really like this one. The last line reminds me of Bright Eyes, though.
4.10.08 / 11pm
thinking that the best is has gone before makes me very depressed… today is not anyplace i ever wanted to be…..
4.11.08 / 1am
The circles of time. Very nice!
4.11.08 / 4am
Wow, now that song is gonna stay in my head for a long time.. loved the flow of words…
sunrise sunset… nice~
4.11.08 / 7am
‘masks..hung on a hidden wall/behind closet doors’ – I love it an the way your verse shifts and resonates.
4.12.08 / 12pm
opposites, circles, I liked
previous past
pellucid present
4.15.08 / 3am
Very well done with such simple and ordinary words.
loved those words
juxtaposition
the journey
previous past
pellucid present
I left me hanging in mid air for a while.
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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